ANSHFH Comics

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Post by Astar »

I'm a fan, so I'll post my work! Keep in mind that I only wrote Andrew's story on the page in the link, and all the subcomics...although there is one subcomic I have no clue why I made...The other series, (Big evil's, sTrEeT's, Blazeman's) were made by them for the series. Once Blazeman finishes his series, I am going to make the actual series where the four characters join together.

The link to the comics is here.
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Very interesting. There are some problems with English, but that seems to be fairly common in these days. The text/action is written like a poorly written comic book, because of the slight repetitions, un-necessary statements, and mixing sprites from multiple games(Not really a bad quality, just doesn't fit very well.)
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Sometimes I am very confused of whats going one. I like your sprites but the whole mario switcheroo got me confused because I didn't know who was who anymore.

Oh one more thing, try and make transitions between comics, because its a real pain to click back and click the next link.
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Okay, I'll try to improve the future comics.
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I was gonna put multiple p.o.v. comics but you obviously beat me there. I think Phred does that too.
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I might sound stupid here, but what are p.o.v. comics?
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I'm pretty sure he is referring to point of view. Since you have four seperate characters in the same storyline, you have multiple point of views for your comic. When you really think about it, most comics have multiple point of views simply because they don't always follow the main character around.
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True, it's just like yours but instead this takes the sub character and makes them a main character. And Astar whens your next update i sure wouldn't mind reading more comics.
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G byrd wrote:Astar whens your next update i sure wouldn't mind reading more comics.
Well not today, because last night was my b-day party and I pulled an all nighter, and now I'm tired. :( Tomorrow (Wednsday) I will add a new comic, or if I get bored, multiple ones. :roll:
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keep up the good work!
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I drank a coke and got enough energy to make a comic I was planning on making for awhile. It is in the "Subcomix" section, and titled, "Daddy, where do mixed sprites come from?" Enjoy!
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nice
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"Author's Eraser Powers" comic is up! At least, I think that is what I titled it...I posted it up earlier today, in subcomics.
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what exactly does ANSHFH mean?
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